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Synchro
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Rolvak
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| Subject: Re: just a random run loop, improving my running :D  Wed Jan 19, 2011 3:24 pm | |
| Very sweet nice flow but I noticed a problem on that shadow it goes lieterally over the tree but I love it, I might be getting your pivots for further studies  | |
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Synchro
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kidwiththeshoes
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| | Subject: Re: just a random run loop, improving my running :D Wed Jan 19, 2011 7:05 pm | |
| That's awesome, smooth. I like your work! | |
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sage
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| | Subject: Re: just a random run loop, improving my running :D Wed Jan 19, 2011 7:26 pm | |
| it's really nice!
the only thing i have to say is that the head and upper body could use a tiny bit more easing | |
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Synchro
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True Underdog
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| | Subject: Re: just a random run loop, improving my running :D Thu Jan 20, 2011 6:04 pm | |
| It's good, better than me, (in pivot not flash lol) but the problem is is that the head bobbing and the hands moving towards the replay of the animation, the just POP right back up. Did you notice that? But yes, it's very good. | |
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zachsims620
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| | Subject: Re: just a random run loop, improving my running :D Thu Jan 20, 2011 7:10 pm | |
| work on the shakiness
the flow
easing
and you will be perfect | |
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Synchro
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| | Subject: Re: just a random run loop, improving my running :D Fri Jan 21, 2011 3:51 am | |
| - True Underdog wrote:
- It's good, better than me, (in pivot not flash lol) but the problem is is that the head bobbing and the hands moving towards the replay of the animation, the just POP right back up. Did you notice that? But yes, it's very good.
thanks underdog, i a didnt notice that, and i dont really get what you mean....
- zachsims620 wrote:
- work on the shakiness
the flow
easing
and you will be perfect
thanks, but, it was a test? so it doesnt really matter... | |
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True Underdog
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| | Subject: Re: just a random run loop, improving my running :D Sun Jan 23, 2011 12:17 pm | |
| I'll show you what I meant. Check this post after a while, it'll be updated with an example animation. UPDATE   The don't is what you did with the front arm and the head. | |
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gab82795
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| | Subject: Re: just a random run loop, improving my running :D Sat Feb 05, 2011 1:54 am | |
| Lol i like it i dont notice the difference really with true underdog's example lol but i see what to do now. Nice pivots! | |
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Choiceinator
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| | Subject: Re: just a random run loop, improving my running :D Sun Feb 06, 2011 9:41 am | |
| well theres no easing in the bottom 1 and in the top 1 there is easing | |
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