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buizel200 Brigadier General
Minecraft Username : buizel200 Posts : 421 Posting Points : 52119 Join date : 2010-03-20 Age : 29 Location : Far Far Away in a land not far from here.
| Subject: Im I interz? Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:00 pm | |
| Intermediate? No........for fun. - Spoiler:
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Rolvak Super Cool Story Bro
Minecraft Username : Rolvak Posts : 999 Posting Points : 52834 Join date : 2010-03-22 Age : 27 Location : In Tony's shower
| Subject: Re: Im I interz? Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:07 pm | |
| Well Buizel that was nicely done your almost there the physics were good (on my opinion) it flows. Keep up the good work. PS: post more animations one example isin't enough, now go out there and make us proud | |
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sage Angel Of Death
Posts : 1402 Posting Points : 57185 Join date : 2009-01-27 Age : 29
| Subject: Re: Im I interz? Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:18 pm | |
| sorry, but no. the actions need more build up. he doesn't crouch befor his attacks or anything. the attacks need to be followed through it needs some more easing it's kinda shakey it's a bit stiff the flow isn't very well done. it needs improvement. | |
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kidwiththeshoes Cobra Commander
Posts : 2381 Posting Points : 58737 Join date : 2009-01-17 Age : 28 Location : On the Unternets, yes, the unternets
| Subject: Re: Im I interz? Wed Sep 01, 2010 7:26 pm | |
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buizel200 Brigadier General
Minecraft Username : buizel200 Posts : 421 Posting Points : 52119 Join date : 2010-03-20 Age : 29 Location : Far Far Away in a land not far from here.
| Subject: Re: Im I interz? Wed Sep 01, 2010 9:55 pm | |
| D: damn it but i was pertty fliping close right? | |
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epicpivotmaster520 Lieutenant Colonel
Posts : 321 Posting Points : 51989 Join date : 2010-03-17 Age : 34 Location : done with everything
| Subject: Re: Im I interz? Wed Sep 01, 2010 10:18 pm | |
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buizel200 Brigadier General
Minecraft Username : buizel200 Posts : 421 Posting Points : 52119 Join date : 2010-03-20 Age : 29 Location : Far Far Away in a land not far from here.
| Subject: Re: Im I interz? Wed Sep 01, 2010 10:27 pm | |
| - zachsims520 wrote:
- yes
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True Underdog Private First Class
Posts : 112 Posting Points : 51618 Join date : 2010-03-29 Location : In Your Computer, Eating Your Cookies NO LIE
| Subject: Re: Im I interz? Thu Sep 02, 2010 1:46 pm | |
| I'm with Sage. In the first animation, most movements were un-anticipated, choppy or they were just un-eased. Focus more on the flow, your easing, choppiness, shakiness, and some force of the animation than what happens in it. The animation is also stiff. Move EVERY joint in a frame where the stick is moving to avoid stiffness.
The second one was.. OK. As I said about the last animation, it's un-eased and it's a little choppy.
I'm not giving you a rank, but it's not intermediate. | |
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Sharp9939 Low Class Member
Posts : 25 Posting Points : 49840 Join date : 2010-09-12 Age : 26 Location : Romania
| Subject: Re: Im I interz? Sun Sep 12, 2010 3:02 pm | |
| Well, obviously, no! Altough the animation is pretty random, I assume you put some work in it ... Notice how at the very end his left leg is stiff. Take care of small details and make it flow a little more, maybe add some more movement and make it even more dynamic ... And maybe then you will become intermediate | |
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