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They are good, but in the second one, it is 'where'. All very good though.

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i shooter looked good but the victim was really stiff. maybe make him look frightened when the shooting starts.

Update: 8/18/2010

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in the middle one:
his arms go back and forth after the kick. it doesn't make much sense to me and looks kinda weird.
his tail was also animated in a weird way. it looked shaky, choppy, and stiff :/

the top:
it was pretty stifff.
the arms could have been eased more when they do the "force push" type thing
the broken floor shaking looked good, but it drooping looked kinda unrealistic.

the bottom:
also nice easing, and also stiff.

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If this is at lest borderline, vote for move with +1 if not -1 in your post.

look at how the stick movez rate that nothing else

no. -1

why it's not:
-it's stiff
-the foot placement is pretty shaky
-nearly every movement could use more easing
-the back arm looks a bit shaky
-not enough flow
-weird stances
-the box floats a pixel off of the ground for the end of the anim
-front leg is shaky when he goes to touch the box
-it looks a bit choppy when he goes to touch the box

suggestions for the anim:
-you could add some more frames in after he goes through the portal/before he falls. it happens too fast to give the effect that he fell from the sky.
-the impact from the speeding box would most likely knock him down. he wasn't braced for it or anything.

buizel200 wrote:

look at how the stick movez rate that nothing else

you are ranked on the entire animation, not just one part of it. if you weren't, your rank would not be accurate.

I can't really add much to what Sage said. I'd have said followthrough but that's encompassed in flow. When the box rocks back and forth as the [arm?] throws the stick man I would have had it rock the opposite direction each time.

I liked the thing that came out of the box - your lack of easing was appropriate there because it was a sudden and unexpected movement, but everywhere else it made it look worse.

Added flash :-: Blur test

great timing on the blur

the part where he is flying through the air needs more easing

sage wrote:

great timing on the blur

the part where he is flying through the air needs more easing

ya i know but i just made that piv for blur testing thats it

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