My animations

here a few of my animations i know there badbut im still new to pivot so just tell me how i can improve
one of my first dbz fights


a preview to an upcoming dbz fight


I was testing to see if i could make a stick dissappear


a walk test


another walk


another walk


a preview to my first pivot war


just practicing


my first dbz fight


easing test

Well they are shaky, choopy and stiff but we are here to help ^_^
Try to speed thing up, move every joint in every frame ETC...

Reaaaly choppy. There's lots of foot sliding, too.

i do like the beam on the first pivot but the animation itself needs work, along with all of the others

update
only rank the leg movements

First DBZ Fight: Pretty bad. Has bad foot placement, it's choppy, uneased, stiff, shaky,rusty and slow.
Upcoming DBZ Fight : Too short, rusty, uneased and stiff.
3rd Animation : Effect was good, animation was bad.
1st Walk Test : Choppy, stiff, and uneased. Try to move the arms along with the legs, so it looks more realistic.
2nd Walk Test : Stiff, bad foot placement, choppy, and the arms barely move.
3rd Walk Test : Same problem, try moving the arms along with the legs, and ease it.
First Pivot War Preview : Short, rusty, stiff, choppy and uneased.
Just Practicing : Bad, uneased, stiff, choppy, and rusty.
Easing Test : Much better than the first animations, if you could to like this to all animations ....
''Update: Leg Movements'' - While running, you must move all the joints in every frame. But anyway, it's much better than the first running tests.
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Overall rank : Low-Beginner

Look up some tutorials about easing, reducing stiffness ( aka moving every joint in every frame ), smoothing and flowing.

Also, try to focus more on basic things at your rank. ( e.g. running, walking, punching, kicking etc )

But keep practicing, I still see some potential.
'Nuff said.

srry ive been inactive cause of school its been a pain and heres an animi
was testing the fps

Sharp9939 wrote:

First DBZ Fight: Pretty bad. Has bad foot placement, it's choppy, uneased, stiff, shaky,rusty and slow.
Upcoming DBZ Fight : Too short, rusty, uneased and stiff.
3rd Animation : Effect was good, animation was bad.
1st Walk Test : Choppy, stiff, and uneased. Try to move the arms along with the legs, so it looks more realistic.
2nd Walk Test : Stiff, bad foot placement, choppy, and the arms barely move.
3rd Walk Test : Same problem, try moving the arms along with the legs, and ease it.
First Pivot War Preview : Short, rusty, stiff, choppy and uneased.
Just Practicing : Bad, uneased, stiff, choppy, and rusty.
Easing Test : Much better than the first animations, if you could to like this to all animations ....
''Update: Leg Movements'' - While running, you must move all the joints in every frame. But anyway, it's much better than the first running tests.
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Overall rank : Low-Beginner

Look up some tutorials about easing, reducing stiffness ( aka moving every joint in every frame ), smoothing and flowing.

Also, try to focus more on basic things at your rank. ( e.g. running, walking, punching, kicking etc )

But keep practicing, I still see some potential.
'Nuff said.

that really made me choke on my cokkie D: no more long CCs k?

Extra long CC's is what sharp does. Can't ask him not to do it or it would be denying his rights. xD