Zed
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 | Subject: Another competition WIP test  Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:14 pm | |
| This is the beginning of a competition entry. It's looking like some reasonably good people are entering, so I need every last pixel criticised as harshly as possible for shakiness, anticipation, followthrough, easing (both wherever there are enough frames for it and where there aren't so I can blur), physics, etc. https://2img.net/h/i771.photobucket.com/albums/xx353/Zed31415/Dodgeballcollab3-2.gif When it's done I'll have added more balls on the floor that roll past to show a moving background and there'll be at least three more of the things flying past and missing as he jumps around. It'll also have a bit of action at the end of it that I'm working on now. Edit: finished product:  I'm not especially happy with it: there was a lot of shakiness I could have gotten rid of and I didn't get a chance to blur the arms, not to mention the fact that there're at least three places I didn't ease at all. I wanted longer slo-mo too. It's the best I'll be able to come up with this week though, so I'll enter it anyway.
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kidwiththeshoes
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| | Subject: Re: Another competition WIP test Tue Dec 29, 2009 8:39 pm | |
| Amazing flow, I can't wait for the finished product ^_^ | |
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Zed
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| | Subject: Re: Another competition WIP test Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:15 pm | |
| Updated the first post with the completed entry. It wasn't as good as it could have been, but I ran out of time. | |
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kidwiththeshoes
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| | Subject: Re: Another competition WIP test Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:24 pm | |
| Haha I love it! I love the flow of it! | |
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Zed
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| | Subject: Re: Another competition WIP test Thu Jan 07, 2010 6:25 pm | |
|  Thanks | |
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pivguy
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| | Subject: Re: Another competition WIP test Sun Feb 07, 2010 9:23 am | |
| nice.. what slowmo btw? i didnt see it  | |
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Zed
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| | Subject: Re: Another competition WIP test Sun Feb 07, 2010 12:59 pm | |
| Just before he throws the ball that makes the smoke. | |
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pivguy
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| | Subject: Re: Another competition WIP test Wed Feb 10, 2010 4:26 pm | |
| right....  | |
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