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Don´t hurt flowers!
Flowers will hurt you



PS:
i made all the effects and that 3d flower shuriken thingy myself
sorry bout the rank question



Update:
my PW with oreofriend45...i think thats his name..



UPDATE!!!



ok the walk at the beginning..i wanted it to look stiff...and ya not finished yet..
and MAJOR project:



i made all the sticks exept teh ground and teh floor...MAJOR GIF RAPE AT ALL 2 ANIMATIONS
if u dont beleive me here are the pivs:

(il post them soon..pivotUP doesnt work..)

Very nice animation.

rank?

You're off balance in a number of places and the movement sets aren't great - walking especially. Generally you need more frames on everything. It also all seems incredibly simple. You rarely keep things in one place long enough to show any real talent for animating them, and it can confuse the viewer to have things moving so much.

I don't like ranks generally, so I won't give you one. They tend to be incredibly subjective and stifle creativity, not to mention promoting arrogance and the rejection of valid cc.

Yeah Zed's right about ranks, they mean nothing. Animate for fun, make it a hobby, not competitive.

Gratz on Corporal Zed

pretty flower
nice effects

i agree with the too short of scenes and ranking comment

Zed wrote:

You're off balance in a number of places and the movement sets aren't great - walking especially. Generally you need more frames on everything. It also all seems incredibly simple. You rarely keep things in one place long enough to show any real talent for animating them, and it can confuse the viewer to have things moving so much.

I don't like ranks generally, so I won't give you one. They tend to be incredibly subjective and stifle creativity, not to mention promoting arrogance and the rejection of valid cc.

check out the new anim!!

I think you need to slow things down some more and ease them a bit better. Make them more fluid. It's generally a bit jerky. Work on the positions of your running too. The movements in the kicks at the beginning were good though. Good vision of what you want stuff to look like.

Zed wrote:

I think you need to slow things down some more and ease them a bit better. Make them more fluid. It's generally a bit jerky. Work on the positions of your running too. The movements in the kicks at the beginning were good though. Good vision of what you want stuff to look like.

tnx,
i wanted the run to look like that

this is really good, i'm still a beginner, well mid-beginner not yet this far. thanks for inspiring me to make pivots in the future

On the second one you need to watch your reaction. have at least 1 frame where the foot or fist hits wherever or else it looks like he's dodged the attack. Apart from that thought i like it.

plugger543 wrote:

this is really good, i'm still a beginner, well mid-beginner not yet this far. thanks for inspiring me to make pivots in the future

Well,
thank you

Very nice... some movements were a bit to sudden, sometimes the sticks have to be a little more ragdollish, because ATM they're a little stiff...

cool, the one at the end with the sword is pretty cool

Willy, I've warn'd you enough. Bye!